How can I improve these two poems? - pinky the film star
First verse:
In love with you, I fell.
A float of hell.
Silent Dreams
Fantasies in my head.
Turn and bind.
You have thoughts of suicide
What happens to my reputation?
I'm not Cinderella
but I feel like a princess.
Why depressed?
I suppose you want to be true.
There is no reason to believe by that is not the impossible.
The rejection is a stylish prostitute cold heart.
It makes you slip and fall to the ground.
Beautiful and terrible.
Pinky promise on our hearts and hope to die.
Baby, let me wipe the tears when you cry,
and a smile on, it will be you.
Let's make happy memories
HD movie, and I hope for the Kodak moments.
Poem 2:
Picture perfect.
Fotogene face.
Dream fall into place.
Floating in grace.
The capture of meteors.
Fashion, Beauty Icon.
Vogue, Gucci, Prada.
Tell them if they.
Work.
Ramp for the photo shoot.
This seems perfect, honey.
A pose.
Flaunt her name.
I want to go now.
Do not settle for less.
Mine is the pretty face that you, in retrospect
on the cover of the magazine.
Pinky The Film Star How Can I Improve These Two Poems?
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